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Happy Thanksgiving to Those Who Celebrate. My family doesn't but it's been a wonderful week for me in my fandom. I'm so thankful for all the fun and friends.

First a quick rec: a beautiful, absolutely beautiful piece of fiction that speaks to all my weaknesses--the RenIshi bond and the attention Ishida gives to Orihime. Even so, it's just plain good writing, emotional and descriptive and "real": Dimming Bright by [personal profile] schweinsty

Next up, how's about some shipping discussion? I enjoy it more than football.
There's a lot of crap out there, lots of senseless squabbling, but recently some of the discourse on contextual stuffs was criticized by some: Why, one fan asked, do people insist on writing essays trying to convince people of their opinions when Kubo will eventually do whatever he wants?

This person is into the "fun" of shipping and comes from a particular ship recently given to elucidating its pairings subtext with numerology and Discovery channel videos of bald eagles mating (I kid you not---here's one of those Infamous 4chan threads that calls that particular fandom on its excesses).

Anyway, shipping essays grounded in geek literature post-modern classes are.... JUST AS FUN AS NUMEROLOGY! For a real ride, go to Bleach Asylum's Shipping Debate. Things get rocky but less rocky than one would expect and there's a lot of enjoyable nerdom in the discourse, attempts at empiricism, and recently I fangasmed over an exchange between Starwing and my man [personal profile] sinta:

WARNING: LONG


Starwing:


**I sought out my prof and discussed it with him just now. I didn't explain my point very well, I'm afraid. So I'm going to see if I can put it more simply, now that I understand my own argument a little more. XP


It's what is called the 'ghost in writing'. All writers have them. Though theoretically, the 'perfect' writer would not. The better a writer is, the less ghosts he/she has. And the closer Authorial intent resembles the resulting effect in readers.

In Writing:
Author Intent --> Written text/drawn panels/film/etc. --> Expected Audience reaction

However, we need to factor in the ghosts in the writing.
Intended text + ghost --> Expected and Unexpected audience reactions


In an editing process, the editor and author theoretically work together to get rid of the 'ghosts' or at least address them. Often, the ghost inspires the story to go in new directions. Ghosts in writing are not concrete (because if they're concrete, good writers wouldn't have them); rather they result of the transition of the story from the author's mind into the audiences'. They can result from cultural influences and differences in the readers. But they DO exist and MUST be accounted for.


HarryxHermione in HP, IMHO, was a ghost in writing. Something that is physically in the text that the author did not intend, that creates a specific reaction in the readers.


I do not believe the IchiHime vs. IchiRuki rivalry in the audience is a result of a ghost in writing. I believe Kubo intended this. But even if this wasn't Kubo's intention, Kubo still needs to address it. Although he doesn't have the same editing process that a writer would, his work is serialized and there is plenty of time to account for ghosts.


@debbie, I'm so glad you could follow that. ^^' I'm not very good at explaining, I'm afraid.

Sinta reacts to Starwing:


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@Sinta, lol,



Hm, you're looking at it from a plot-development standpoint. I'm looking at what effect the text has on the audience, and whether there is any author intention behind it.

I don’t think so, while you have take audience into account I think this would go against your theory, Inoue/Ichigo in japan is basically a non-issue, it so overwhelmingly unpopular.

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Let's see... Once again, in VII, Cloud, Aeris and Tifa formed an obvious, established love triangle. Upon Aeris' death, there is no indication that Cloud will return Tifa's feelings. However, the audience then accepted CloudxTifa as the most likely pairing. The game (and the movie) ends in a highly CloudxTifa note, even without Cloud once expressing an interest. Why? Because some things don't require heavy developments for the audience to accept.


The problem with this comparison is that VII is very distinguishable from Bleach, there was a base for Tifa to go for Cloud unlike in Bleach. I do think people will think in the alternative if not Ichigo/Rukia then Ichigo/inoue, but it doesn’t mean the Kubo meant to set it up that way and that is whats important. You take your audience into account, but no self respecting story teller and author is going to change the flow, purpose and plot of their story for their audience. It is my story, if you don’t like it that is your problem I think if that was the case and seeing how popular Ichigo and Rukia are he would developed it much faster. He’s doing things at this own pace. Furthermore, change things in the plot because of commercial reasons or fan reaction would often make the story inconsistent; Bleach of all things is consistent.
Some things don’t need heavy development but they need enough to stand on their own independent entity especially a couple. You need enough development that, when it happens you don’t have a WTF look on your face.



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I'll have to disagree with you here.

A story is essentially about the audience; plot, development, characterization comes secondary to that.

When I write I don’t write what I think an audience would like, I write it because that is how I want it written. I have a specific story that I am trying to tell; you as an audience are just along for the ride. If you don’t like it you need to get off that ride. So I would say the exact opposite; Plot, Development etc comes first. Everything else is just details. I think that’s how most writers, especially in the fantasy area write. They write the story they want thinking that there will be some place for their story.

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If a story successfully makes the majority of the audience FEEL that there is a triangle and a competition, then IMHO, that over-rides even the original text. I hate to bring up HP, but if we're just looking at the HarryxHermione and HarryxGinny shippers - by your definition, was it ever a real love triangle? No. However, it had a much greater effect than most real love triangles I know, because it generated such strong reader response, and had the same effect.

JK Rowling never had a real triangle, she said so herself, People see what they want, that doesn’t mean the author has any intention of placing two characters together or turning into a mutually dependant relationship. Inoue’s development of the last 130 chapters have been mostly about her. They just happen to have some ichigo moments which are Ichigo/Inoue moments for the sole reason that she likes him. I also don’t think that the majority of people think there is a love triangle, at not the people whom this is being written for.

Let me illustrate, Tenpa tenga Gurren Langann, it is a prime example of the audience misunderstanding of the writers intent and provides strong evidence against your "Results theory".

Many of the issues we are dicussing about plot, flow, outside influence etc played a part in this widely regarded anime. Despite the fans reaction the exact situation we are discusing (the exisitence of a love triangle and mutually dependant relationship) the issues were never discussed. They thought that the girl who had become the initial love interest would create a love triangle with the seconedary character who became the lead; Yoko (Initial love interest; had an a very strong IRR with the main character) Simon (lead) and Nia (secondary turned lead) had all the potential for a love triangle. But again this was never the intention of the author, Yoko feelings were never displayed or commented upon again, either was Simon’s. And you should know that Simon’s feelings for Yoko was HUGE to the plot in the beginning of the story. Huge. The reason that Harry/Hermonie/Ginny seem to have such a great effect is there were just so many fans. There is also a fundetmenal difference to Bleach. The fact that Hermonie was Harry’s best female trusted each other, spent an overwhelming amount of time sharing etc and the topic was never really even breached between the two goes against people’s understanding of female male interaction. What do I mean? They spent that much time together and it never crossed their mind that they might be good for another? People look at their potential IRR and compare that to Ginny which was very sudden in regards to Harry and are like WTF. I am getting off topic, sorry. In short, people saw what they wanted, and the author did what they had always planned regardless of what the fans said. There was resolution but there was no love triangle, regardless of the effect on the readers and wha tthey percived

Another thing you need to consider is WHO is the audience; most of Japan, again, doesn’t think that there is a love triangle between Ichigo/inoue/Rukia. Inoue/Ichigo has very little support despite the fact that Inoue is 10th in the popularity contest. Where you are getting mixed up is Inoue’s popularity here and in Canada, she is far more popular in thes state then in Japan. People like her, so they think she has more chance/importance then she really does.

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Audience response is something ALL literature has to consider. And you may not agree with me, but I think if the majority of the audience says there is a triangle; it exists. Just like in all those classical texts; when the authors are asked, "did you intend for so and so metaphor to happen?" The answer is often, "No, but the metaphor is there and the readers see it. Therefore it is effective."

If you look at the vast amount of ship-wars around this pairing, they would not exist if a triangle did not exist. 'TECHNICALLY' we can say it's not a true love triangle. But that does not matter. Effectively, there is one, and that is the important thing.

See as I don’t see the love triangle as important, just a piece of the side story, I don’t see people’s reaction to as important either. Shippers see what they want (we see that all the time don't we? Remember Asma Laksa from NF and BF). Shipper will exsist regardless of what the story shows, One Piece, the author himself said that all his characters are "in love" with adventure but there is still a huge shipping population for that manga. So I think the techncial aspect might be more important then you think.



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Well then the question I ask you is, why do the dependency of these outcomes have to depend on character relationships? Why can't the dependency of IchiRuki and IchiHime be on the progression, comparisons and parallels in the plot? Why can't the dependency of IchiRuki and IchiHime be the observed reaction of the audience?

They are but the progression, comparisions and parallels should arise out of the characters interactions. If everything (or just about everything) is in Rukia’s favor is it really a love triangle/mutual relationship? The reason whythe dependency of IchiRuki and IchiHime can't be the observed reaction of the audience is because of the manga evidence isn't there to substain it.

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The analogy doesn't exactly fit... but right now, I feel as if you have the theoretical aspect of a science experiment down, but haven't factored in outside sources like marketting, audience, authorial preference and factors that traditionally we scorn. 'A good author doesn't let readers sway his opinion' just like a good theory won't be changed because of outside factors. But the RESULT changes. The RESULT is that in the west, we have two prominent groups of people who are pitted against each other because of love for a character and how they see the manga. If we just consider the development of character relationships in the story, it is overly simplistic, IMHO. We also need to look at the plot. Does the plot compare Orihime and Rukia? Yes, HM and SS. Does the plot compare IchiRuki and IchiHime? Yes. One is vague and one is one-sided, but that doesn't change the results, in my view.
The plot comparisons are ambigious and different enough that it doesn't really matter; think for a moment, what if we go to another arc where Ichigo isn't saving a girl? Are you still going to be able to use those things? Probably not, you will have to shift your focus, thats why the evidence is stronger that way. I think your "Results Analysis" is too focused on the ends as opposed to the means. I afraid if you do that your conclusions will have big holes in them. (At least in theory)



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Ichigo's reception to Orihime's advances is only one factor. In literature, other factors are involved.

I disagree that there are no IchiHime hints. So if I picture the manga without Rukia, I can name several scenes and plot points which causes the audience to assume the enventual IchiHime pairing. And considering the genre, that is enough. Not all genres require the same kind of build-up for a pairing to be considered cannon. Would IchiHime be a well developed pairing? No. But would it convince the majority of the readers that this is what Kubo intended? Yes.
The story is in the hands of one person; he had to have an intention in building each character the way that he did. Most scenes that are Ichigo/inoue are really just Inoue----> Ichigo scenes. Very few of them are really Ichigo/Inoue. This could have been a means to really develop her character and not develop her potential relationship, I think thats one of the holes of your "Results Analysis" There are too many other explanations for the behavior that is commonly seen as Ichigo/Inoue.

There is another place where we differ, I can’t picture the manga without rukia because with out rukia we don’t have a story. If we were say that Bleach was the real world, Ichigo and Inoue would probably never have developed the way that they have, so this is a moot point for me. But even i could, their relationship was directly effected by rukia without that efffect there was no way they were moving forward. Specific instances that aren’t put into a higher context have very little meaning. They aren't dispositive but circumstantial Those little scenes aren’t enough to take way from Ichigo/Rukia because I still can’t see them together in any way shape or form.

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So without Rukia, IchiHime is poorly developed, but most readers would say that's the obvious pairing. The dispute comes from the fact that we get opposing trends with IchiRuki and IchiHime.
It doesn’t matter if people argue in the alterative most still wouldn’t accept it and probably call for Kubo’s blood, but if ichigo is actually developed, they may hate it but they will accept it. Especially if Ichigo/Rukia actually get around to discussing the nature of the ir relationship.

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Similarly, without Orihime, IchiRuki would be undisputed. It would be better developed, but also more vague than IchiHime. But most readers would read Bleach and say Ichigo and Rukia are the obvious pairing, if one exists.

And I can confidently say that these scenes and trends are intentional on Kubo's part. He intentionally wrote Bleach so that part of the audience would be convinced of IchiRuki, and a lesser portion would see IchiHime.

Therefore, if Kubo effectively created this split in his audience, I highly doubt he is going to not address it.

But again he may not address in the way that you want, you are trying to draw binding connections to the character because of a potential conflict, what if he just has one, two or all three die? Then it is resolved is it not? That is why I say that it is stronger to look for evidence in the individual relationship as opposed to point to create a point system based on interpretation of individual scenes and taking away from one couple potential relationship because of an precived interaction of another relationship.

Even he did split the fans on purpose, the relationship isn't the main focus of the story and therefore could have another purose for it. That is why you should be careflu before you imply a lable like mutualy dependant I think it will mess up your analysis if you aren't careful.



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Forgot about Shuffle... but yes, this is off topic...

Watch Gurren lagan I think you would like it…..



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^^' Well, why is it limited to a mutually dependent love triangle based on character relationships when IchiRuki vs. IchiHime obviously isn't?

When trying to predict future events in a story, if you want to do it accurately, you can’t base it on the precived results, Shuffle and Canvas II will show that just focusing on results is a bad idea. I wrote my Love triangle Essay because I don’t think there is a love triangle, I see the potential for a love triangle but I don’t focus on the ends I focus on the means, And the means just aren’t there to turn this into a real love triangle.


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I think I've been arguing that we have a love triangle that is communicated through different media, not just character relationships, but one every bit as important and perhaps even more effective. The effect I talk about here are 'result' based, determined by what kind of interpretations readers take away from it. I remember your take on an effective triangle, but I'm afraid I disagree with your priorities. Bleach is a commercial story, and while we don't like to talk about markets, it is a significant pressure. Just like the pressure all editors have on authors.

I disagree, the most effective love triangle are going to displayed through the character interactions. Shows where the love triangle is the primary focus will use those things you mentioned as a supplement. Despite the fact that it is a commercial story it still has to remain consistent and because the author had no intention could mean that he intents to resolve the discussion in away that no foresaw.

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So if we look at the results, Kubo has split his readership into people that care and people that don't care. Then in the people that care, he has split them into IchiRuki supporters and IchiHime supporters. I know the proportion of IchiHime supporters are less in number and all, but that's not the point. The point is that there IS a conflict presented in his story, and it IS causing the audience to react to it. Therefore, by the basic literature rules of contracts and broken contracts, he is inevitably pressured to resolve this conflict. Unless Kubo is saying something SPECIFIC by not pairing Ichigo with either girls (and so far, he hasn't been that kind of writer and takes risks in other ways), the story will inevitably end with IchiRuki or IchiHime.

This is the biggest problem with your analysis.

Kubo hasn’t split his readership, the people he is writing for are not split. Inoue/Ichigo has very little fan base in Japan. Now if you think that Inoue’s popularity here is enough for him to make the potential love triangle a bigger deal then it is, maybe you have a argument otherwise…..


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I think where we disagree the most are the fundamental priorities of a story. Sort of like the whole 'write for yourself/ideal reader' vs. 'write for the audience' debate. I am of the opinion that writers do both, but in the end, they are judged by how well they write for an audience, especially for a commercial piece like Bleach.

You are saying here that he cares how people judge his writing, but you forget that the fact that people read his writing is judgment enough. That is the important thing, he doesn’t have to worry about the “results” you mentioned because people already read it. He focuses on the story that he wants to tell.



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Same here. XP
Ulimately, I don't think results or ghost of a story (especially in this) are strong enough to counter the plot and characterization. To say that there is a mutual relationship because some people interpret it that way I think is a false premise. If the outside considerations you mention aren't consistent with the mangas flow, characterization and outline. I think the later qualities hold up against your ourside influences. I do understand your point however, and I think thats what is important.

On a final note, I think in the realms of practical application and effect, there may be a love triangle, I was merely noting that arguments based on an assumed mutual relationship aren’t going to be as strong as arguments based on the individual relationship dynamic.

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Damn it Star, you see what you do to me….Ok I will stop here in our debate to let some others get in on this. I think we have both made our points though I feel sorry for some people who are just coming in, they are probably like “what the hell are they talking about?”


Debbiechan,

If I didn’t think it was inappropriate (and maybe a little weird) I would kiss you; that was a great post I think


Come to my journal; it is rad!!!
http://sinta1.livejournal.com/

Starwing:

Yes, back on track. ^^' I apologize for the divergence, but I think such a discussion is valuable. I think if we're debating or discussing pairings, we should also examine the reason why we disagree.


@Sinta,
One last post, I promise. ^^ It was an enjoyable exchange while it lasted.
Spoiler! <input ... >

IchiHime's popularity in western society is a result of the ghost in writing. What is in effect here is the difference in culture and expectations of the audience, and the transition of the story from Kubo's mind to readers.

Ghosts are not mistakes, merely factors the writer has not taken into account. But it is the job of every writer out there to address their ghosts. Just like sources of errors in a lab, unavoidable, expected, and even useful at times, but they must be addressed.

I do remember that in Japan and Asian societies, IchiHime is not popular. However, it is not nonexistent either. That's what I hear from my pen pals in Taiwan anyways. Japan is Kubo's intended audience and whatever he does there, we can assume is intentional.

However, Kubo is now working on an international stage. He needs to worry about more than Japan. We are not his intended audience, but no matter, we ARE his audience and all authors MUST address their readers in some way. Shoot them down, appease them, make things clear for them, ignore them intentionally... Whatever the author's intention is, if you want to market, you deal with your readers. Because the readers are your only windows into whether your story works or not.


Honestly, if readers get a different reaction than what the author intended, especially if is a mass reaction, that is the result of weak writing. As a reader, if I don't like a story, that tells the author that I am not his audience. However, if I misinterpret a story and see evidence where there shouldn't be evidence, that is a sign of weak writing on the author's part; that there are factors he has neglected that should be addressed.

HarryxHermione was a ghost because Rowling neglected to address the factor that due to prolonged proximity, readers will react in certain ways. She may have never intended for this pairing to happen, but it DID happen for the readers and so she eventually addressed it by pairing Harry with Ginny. IF she had the foresight and wanted to avoid this reader reaction, she could've included hints of Harry or Hermione being distinctly UNINTERESTED.

If IchiHime fans see evidence, and that wasn't Kubo's intention, then that means Kubo has neglected something. He forgot to factor in Orihime's popularity, and that in gaining sympathy for her, he also gained support for IchiHime. THAT is what it means.

When you say there is no evidence for IchiHime, that is an opinion and I disagree with you. I don't think it's very strong evidence, but I think it's there and Kubo wrote them in intentionally.

In a writing process, you write for an ideal audience (yourself, basically), but in the editing process, that is when you fix your story for a real audience. I must ask, has Sinta gone through the editing/publishing process? If you have, you'll agree that that is a basic and critical step to improve your writing. We don't live in bubbles and authors don't write stories in bubbles; we write them because we want readers. This is why authorial voice is so important, and why editing is so important. No matter how much talent you have, if you don't care about your readers, you'll be less successful than another author who DOES care.

You say that no self respecting author would change the flow of his story to suit his audience. I agree. But also, any self respecting author would carefully observe audience reaction and evaluate whether he/she made any mistakes, and address those mistakes if he/she can.

Now I don't believe the comparisons of IchiRuki and IchiHime are a mistake. You ask if Kubo didn't use a girl next, where would my comparison be? The answer is, if HM didn't parallel SS so much and it wasn't Orihime who was kidnapped, there wouldn't be a comparison. If Japan loves IchiRuki so much more than IchiHime, allegedly, that's because by comparison, IchiHime is weaker. Not because the comparison does not exist.

I think IchiHime vs. IchiRuki was intentional. And even if it wasn't, it's still something Kubo has to address because it IS in his work, and I believe he IS addressing the issue through his comparisons and the natural progression of his plot.

Lol, I'll address your points in detail through pm though, when I have more time.

debbiechan reacts to both people tickling her inner schoolmarm and makes out with them:

And I love you both, Sinta and Starwing. *blows giant kiss*

Why can't more shipping discussions be like this!

According to what Starwing is saying (and it sounds like a ship theory out of quantum mechanics--the observer changes the experiment) then popularity of a pairing DOES make a difference. In other words, what MOST readers perceive to be true matters and if some readers perceive something else (and strongly, as is in the case of a IchiOri contingent against a larger IchiRuki fanbase) then we have, by definition, a conflict--whether or not the author intended it or not.

I'm a great fan of the pedagogical function of authorial intent--it's a solid base in the stormy waters of "anything goes/your interpretation is relevant to your social circumstances" post-modern criticism. So yes, I see completely where Sinta is coming from. Kubo's story doesn't have any conflict because in it, Orihime doesn't have a snowball's chance in hell of Ichigo's returning her affection. But how about this--KUBO'S STORY HAS CONFLICT because he intended to place red herrings, doubts, and false leads before his readers?

The majority of the Ichigo and Orihime interaction of recent chapters taking place during Tanabata in real time was CERTAINLY no accident; that timing however was OUTSIDE the story--it was in the realm of interaction with the audience. The IchiOri clues within the story itself were amplified because of the "when the story is being told" timing. In the overall context of the story, though, most readers (in Japan and elsewhere) would tell you that the cards come down in favor of an eventual IchiRuki match (from the plot and characterization alone). Some of those guessing at authorial intent would say that Kubo is throwing clues, emphasizing Orihime's dilemma (only so he can solve it happily in the end) and setting up an eventual IchiOri match. Those not guessing at authorial intent but looking at the plain hard facts of the story and characters as if they were real people would probably be more likely to call IchiRuki a given. I believe most do; the majority of readers see IchiRuki over IchiOri in the manga. I, like Sinta and Starwing, am in that majority. I can see the plot turning IchiOri and eventually Ichigo falling for Orihime but that's "what could be" and Kubo would have to work to make it happen, whereas IchiRuki is "what is in the process of happening" simply because the bond between the two characters is stronger, evolving at a steady pace (Sinta's IRR) and is emphasized by progress of the story itself (thus far).


Lastly, something for people to debate the concept of "canon" over. The databooks haven't been translated yet, and although Kubo is credited with writing them, no one believes that he's actually written every word. Nonetheless the books have new Kubo "approved material" and some interesting summaries of panels in the manga. Can we say that there's been clarification of authorial intent? Insofar as this one page goes, I'm still collecting informations about the nuances of the Japanese (in particular, 'omou' 想い in regards to Ishida's feelings having a strong romantic connotation) but maybe more on that later.



Translation by MelodyMix of Bleach Asylum
of Ishida and Orihime page from the SOULs databook:



Here is what it says

“She is not just a nakama…” Accepting Ichigo’s feelings towards Rukia, Orihime’s heart painfully sways. And inside Ishida, a new feeling develops. “I don’t want to make her sad” (referring to Orihime). With that thought, he wishes for Ichigo’s victory.

Date: 2007-11-22 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
...actually... no. "Ichigo's Rukia"? Sorry, but that's an absolute no, and a massive grammatical cock-up XD

It's a simple one to make, though -- but just be wary of particles - here:

"Ichigo no Rukia wo omou kimochi wo uketomenagara"
一護のルキアを想う気持ちを受け止めながら

First, we'll take out the subject of the sentence - 'Rukia wo omou kimochi (ルキアを想う気持ち)'. This refers to 'feelings felt about Rukia', Rukia being the subject of those feelings, and so she comes first in the sentence/snippet.

Next, we'll go to just who these feelings belong to -- and that would be Ichigo, which we see with 'Ichigo no (一護の)'

So, we have Ichigo's feelings felt about Rukia. He's not possessing Rukia, but possessing feelings about her -- in Orihime's opinion, of course, because remember that this little snippet is talking about Ishida and Inoue.

And finally, the last bit '-wo uketomenagara (を受け止めながら)'. -nagara means 'while' and 'uketomeru' is 'to react to, to catch, to take [the news]' -- so it's 'while reacting to'.

Thus, the initial translation was accurate enough if we put it into context -- "While reacting to Ichigo's feelings felt about Rukia" Orihime's heart etc. etc. -- but always remember that this is contextually about Orihime's feelings. Orihime thinks that Ichigo is in love with Rukia, and so it hurts her, and it would hurt her even more to see Ichigo die, and so Ishida wishes for Ichigo to win the battle, because he doesn't want Inoue to be hurt any further.

Sorry, I'm kind-of a whore for grammar XD I'll go back to lurking now.
Edited Date: 2007-11-22 07:10 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-11-22 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
Ahaha. I'm not Jewish, so I'm afraid I don't really get the references. ^^;

I do think, however, that there's a danger in reading too much into scenes. Especially with Kubo, as he's been generally been very good up to now in laying clues that don't require a lot of digging (at least, not for the Japanese readers -- he's put a lot of thought into his names and his kanji choices -- Kaien's name especially blows me away). And I think that taking SOULs and VIBEs as canonical is... pretty dangerous, especially for us, as we're working from translations, and it's been my experience that a lot of translations and subs... well, they generally stink. Or they miss something vital. Or they will translate a sentence literally and then edit to make it sound a little cooler.

Which always really bugs me, but eh ^^;;;;;

Date: 2007-11-22 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chuuni.livejournal.com
That's how I kind of feel about analysing what the characters say. Sometimes I read an analysis on Bleach and think "Hmmm has Kubo really put as much thought into this for us to reach so many conclusions based on a few words? All in one week and 19 pages?".

No, probably not. Though I'm sure I've done so on many an occasion for my pairing, shipping glasses are oh-so-fun to sport.

Date: 2007-11-22 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
Haha. Honestly, I think that Kubo gives shippers enough to chew over without us having to hunt down more clues. Bleach is like, Unrequited Lovers Anonymous.

Date: 2007-11-22 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] norrowa.livejournal.com
I'm kinda holding out for an ot8 -- Chad/Ichigo/Tatsuki/Orihime/Uryuu/Renji/Rukia/Hanatarou.

... well, I'm not really. But it's a nicely scary thought.

Yeah. Nice.

Date: 2007-11-22 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
...I'm totally lost now XD Although honestly, the musicals are SO UNCANON it kind of hurts :D

Although yeah -- I've always looked at Bleach in terms of, you know, we have a group of people -- dysfunctional people, and they're all growing and healing and finding themselves through each-other, and it always really annoys me when I see shipping debated as though it is just The Couple, and none of their friends -- Ichigo will have feelings for Rukia just as he would Inoue or Chad or Tatsuki, because no matter who he ends up falling for, the rest will always, always be his nakama.

Likewise, it annoys me when 'Orihime is too much of a doormat' is used as an argument against IchiHime, because dude, do you seriously think TATSUKI would let that happen? :D

wow this took a long while to reply to XD

Date: 2007-11-22 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
...hm. In terms of translating, then that passage is very clear -- it's Ishida's thoughts on Inoue's thoughts regarding Ichigo's thoughts about Rukia. It's like the Newtype version of Chinese Whispers.

My personal take on Ishida and his feelings -- and I say this as taking SOULs. for what it effectively is -- that is, five monkeys have gone through the manga for Meaningful Scenes and asked Kubo "YO DOES THIS HAVE SPECIFIC MEANING???? WE'D LIKE TO WRITE ABOUT IT" (particularly if we take his comment on the Renji/Rukia flashback from his VIBEs interview into consideration) -- is that yes. Ishida loves Orihime.

I honestly don't think that there's any doubt about this, just as I don't think there's any doubt that Renji is in love with Rukia, etc. etc. But I think he -- at the end of the day, he's Ishida. He's a closed book, and he's not the sort who will bleed his emotions everywhere unless stressed (case in point, vs. Mayuri). I think, with a character like Ishida, who is so (outwardly) unemotional by default, something like that is a huge insight, you know? He's all-but-enemy to Ichigo, yet for Orihime's sake, he wants Ichigo to win, and live, because it will make her happy. And you know, if Kurosaki did turn around and accept Inoue's love for what it is, Ishida is the type who would just... not say anything, and let her be happy, and step back further.

I think that at the end, unless there's a massive shift in all characters, Ishida is going to end up with heartbreak. We know he loves Inoue. But we know that Inoue loves Ichigo. And Ichigo, over the course of the manga thusfar, has really warmed up to Inoue -- of course, it's nakamaness at the moment, but Bleach has got a good long way to go before the end.

That said, I really disagree with your terming Ishida's love for Inoue higher than Inoue's love for Ichigo. Inoue... is so incredibly holding back when it comes to Ichigo. The only reason we even got her confession was because she thought she might never see him again, after everything they'd been through. Yes, she wants to be with him. She loves him. But in that way, Ishida probably wants to be with Inoue. He loves her. He's just so very different a character that we're unlikely to get that sort of insight into his character unless something incredibly drastic happens, to him or to her.


...anyway, that was horribly disjointed too. XD I'm sorry. I haven't ship-debated in... god, about five years XD

Re: wow this took a long while to reply to XD

Date: 2007-11-22 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
OKAY GOOD :D

I think really, what really slammed the nail into the coffin of Ishida/Orihime is that she's canonically referred to him as being like Tatsuki -- she feels totally comfortable around him (to the point she forgets he's a guy and would be uncomfortable getting changed around her, etc. oh, my heart bled for him there). Ishida will love her -- and he will love her, but to Inoue, he's a friend. Like her best friend, even. Whereas... Inoue's never had that express shooting-down that Ishida has. Ichigo's never said, "I love Rukia" or "I love Tatsuki" or "I'm gay for Renji"; she thinks she knows how he feels, but she could still hope and admire him from afar. And I think that's what really gets to me about Orihime -- she's strong enough to acknowledge this.

And then Ichigo comes along and blasts through walls and Espada to save her - even turns his back on the one she thinks he loves in order to defend her honour (even though Ichigo knows that Rukia is dead or dying - and whatever Ichigo's motives are, you can't deny that that's enough to give Orihime hope, right?).

And likewise, I don't think that loving Inoue and not having her makes Ishida happy. I don't see how. Like, he can be happy for her, happy that she's found somebody worthy of her affections... but it's not him. It'll never be him. And as caring as Ishida is... that'll never make him happy. Maybe right now at the moment, he's content, but I doubt it makes him happy. Even if he does come to terms with himself (and honestly, I wouldn’t be surprised if he already had)... would he act? He knows Inoue loves Ichigo, he’d just be shooting himself down.

...so yeah. in tl;dr form, I tend to agree on that point -- the way they are at the moment, it's not a happy situation, but at least with Inoue, she's got confirmation that she means something. Something more than what she did at the start of the story. Ishida... doesn't. And I can't see that making him happy. Although in the same way, I don't think anybody in canon is happy with their current romantic situations ^^;


I would love to see Ishida have another scene, but honestly, I'm more interested to see how he reacts to Mayuri being his rescuer rather than him realizing his feelings. That's... got to be an absolutely HUGE boot to his (Quincy) pride right there. And then if you factor in that it was ultimately Ichigo who got to Inoue, etc. etc.... I'm making sand-bags for the wave of total angst that's probably coming for half of the main cast once this arc's over, because damn.

I honestly think that it's because he's so closed-off that that's the reason we never get introspection on him - I mean, compare him to Rukia – we’ve never seen her open up to people; her main introspections have been when she's completely alone and upset (both Kaien flashbacks), or have been relayed by other people (Renji). We've only ever had Byakuya introspection when he's been stabbed in the chest and left to bleed with some serious, serious amends to make. If Ishida's suffering, he's going to do it alone, because he's a brave little soldier.

As for Inoue, I have my own theory about her at the moment. I -- personally, I wouldn't be surprised if she refused to leave Hueco Mundo. She's going through hell, and she knows it, she's got Ulquiorra being a little prick to her, but at the same time, she knows that right now she's the only chance they've got of destroying the Hougyoku. This is why I think she's holding back, and not using Tsubaki even though Ichigo's getting steamrolled in front of her. Fighting Aizen's minions isn't the best way to get at the Hougyoku again.

Like you said -- she's not acting. But it seems very Orihime-like to act through... not acting, if that makes sense. She's not a fighter. She's had this drilled into her. But if by not fighting, then she can prove that she's still useful...?

Honestly, I would go with your stance and expand it to everyone at the moment. Nothing is going to happen between anybody because nobody is acting.

...erm. yeah. TL;DR I really tend to go off on one. I'm sorry D:

Re: wow this took a long while to reply to XD

Date: 2007-11-23 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
Well, I was actually referring to the current moment in canon -- in which, at the moment, it's dead and buried (she loves Ichigo, she thinks of him like she does Tatsuki, etc. etc.), but hey, Bleach is pretty much all about the afterlife, SO.

1) I... honestly, I'm not even going to touch this one with a barge-pole but to say that to be quite fair, that refers to about every ship going in Bleach, the whole friends-into-lovers thing. Ichigo/Rukia, Renji/Rukia, Uryuu/Orihime. They all started out as friends -- good friends, best friends. And in the latter two, we have all-but-canonical confirmation that there's an unrequited love there.

2) Honestly, I would, after that display with Tesla and Ichigo's arm/leg/let's torture the sixteen-year-old!yay!, class Bleach as about as seinen as you can get without kicking it out of Shounen Jump. I would also actually call it a lot more mature than some of Jump's recent stories, given the topics it deals with (let's face it, three out of the six main characters have serious self-worth issues, two blame themselves for someone else's death, the whole thing's about death, dying and the afterlife, we've had alluded-to and upcoming genocide... it's really not as happy-yay! as people think it is).

It's not a josei manga, and it's definitely not CLAMP, and so I think that that's ...not the best comparison to make, especially when Kubo's not really given us much to go on with the whole happy-ending thing (especially Rukia. I'm actually seriously worried as to how her story is going to wrap up, and I kind-of... seriously disagree with you over Rukia and Kaien -- I don't think that that's anywhere near finished with yet). And unless Kubo somehow throws a chick-shaped spanner in the works (Tatsuki/Ichigo would be absolutely incredible, and believable), no matter what happens, somebody out of the main love-polygon is going to end up alone. At the moment, it's really looking like Ishida.

I really don't see the similarity between overcoming bad-guys and overcoming personal demons. Our hero is Ichigo, who is quite possibly the king of beating himself up over stuff: and he's still got a massive hurdle to overcome -- Grand Fisher (not to mention his massive, massive mother-complex). He doesn't know that Isshin killed Fisher already. Everyone in Bleach has their own demons to overcome, and these, at least from where I'm reading, seem to be just as important as overcoming the next bad guy, for both the guys and the girls.

This is why I really don't think Bleach is immature -- because it's not just about defeating the bad guys.

As for happy endings... mm. Well. I... am not going to put anything past Kubo, let's put it that way. Nobody aside from Luppi has died yet, and we're presumably two thirds of the way through the story by now.

The thing with Orihime is that she might be reading Ishida wrong, but on the other hand, it's not as though Ishida's really giving her anything to read. He's protecting her against lecherous shinigami, and giving her soft looks when she's not looking, and wishing her to be happy in his head. ...that's it. And honestly, Tatsuki does the same thing. Tatsuki's the one who chases Chizuru away, and looks after her, and wants her to be happy. Orihime really can't be blamed.

3) It could, but honestly, I'd like to think Kubo's not quite as cheap as that. ^^; I'd like to believe he's got some sort of resolution coming, be it a character death or something else.

4) I... would actually love to see an open ending for Bleach, but on the other hand I'm not sure I could stand the shippers squawking ^^; I... honestly don't care who Inoue ends up with, so long as she's happy -- that's all I really want at the end of Bleach, for the characters to be happy (particularly given the oncoming crapstorm that Kubo's probably going to throw at us once this arc's done) which is actually why I can't see IchiRuki happening -- and if it did happen, I can't see it being happy -- but that's a different debate for a different time.

And on that note about Rukia... holycrap301spoilerpics.

Re: wow this took a long while to reply to XD

Date: 2007-11-23 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brightredglow.livejournal.com
I just want to say three things (well four things):

1. This is one of the best discussions I've seen in a long time re this topic. Thoughtful and thought-out on both sides. Well done!

2. (especially Rukia. I'm actually seriously worried as to how her story is going to wrap up, and I kind-of... seriously disagree with you over Rukia and Kaien -- I don't think that that's anywhere near finished with yet).

I so hope you are right. The Arroniro-as-fake-Kaien and the heart speech was frustratingly wrong to me. I'd like to think that part of the story was only the second movement of the Rukia-Kaien story rather than its final chapter.

3. And unless Kubo somehow throws a chick-shaped spanner in the works (Tatsuki/Ichigo would be absolutely incredible, and believable),

As a IchiTats fan, I thank you for the "and believable" part of that sentence. I doubt it'll happen, but if Kubo chose to go that route, he's laid the foundation for it and if it did happen, the fallout for Orihime has the potential to be a truly frightening twist. Again, it is most doubtful that it will happen, but the possibility is always there.

4. Thank you, especially for this particular thread and its participants, for such an interesting read. Reading it makes me a little excited about Bleach again.

Re: wow this took a long while to reply to XD

Date: 2007-11-24 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
1/4- these two totally made me blush ^^ <3

2. I... wouldn't say that the heart-speech was wrong, but I would definitely say that even if Aaroniero never comes back (and now that he's dead, we've all-but-got confirmation that Kaien's moved on now), Rukia's issues with Kaien (which in turn link so wholly to Ichigo) are all-but-over.

3. You're welcome! I really love Ichigo/Tatsuki too, and like you said, it has the potential to really hurt Orihime (and just adds more insanity to the great massive love-polygon that is Bleach), so! :D

<3!

Re: wow this took a long while to reply to XD

Date: 2007-11-23 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girls-are-weird.livejournal.com
nakamaness. wow. i think that's become my new favorite word. ILU ^^ ♥

i've never been fond of ship debates (i'm more of a "let me think whatever i want no matter what little sense it makes and i'll let you think whatever you want" kinda person-- and that "laissez faire" way of thinking is probably why i don't hang out at BA), but in an attempt to make this comment a little less pointless... ^^;;; ...i'm game.

am i the only one around who feels that orihime's... not "hopeful" in any way? as in, i don't think she feels like she has a chance with ichigo at all. i felt, from the point where the ryoka trekked into SS, that she had given up hope. she doesn't seem like the type to change her mind easily, too. so one day, she thought she saw blatant ichiruki and it stuck. and unless something drastic happens, like ichigo directly saying he loves someone else instead, she will think he loves rukia. i don't think she sees his going to save her as a sign of him possibly having feelings for her; i think she saw it as him being his usual, shounen hero self.

but we can't "compare whose love is higher," because their reactions weren't about how strongly they felt, but about who they are as characters. yes, orihime broke down about her unrequited feelings, and yes, we wouldn't have found out if she wasn't in deep pain, but (and i don't have this scene fresh in my mind, so i may be way off) it was more about herself than about ichigo and/or rukia; she was feeling awful because she feels she shouldn't love ichigo. at that point she feels wretched for loving someone who's obviously (to her) not for her. in her mind, this shouldn't happen: if ichigo loves rukia and viceversa, they should be together and she shouldn't feel any pain over that, but she does, and that makes her, in her naivete, feel that she's a horrible person. who could be so awful as to begrudge two of his/her best friends' happiness? it's not a measure of how much she loves ichigo, but of how low she sees herself at that point, and how guilty.

as for ishida, yes, he might want to be with inoue-- very strongly, even-- but as a character, he won't let himself dwell on that. he is such a quincy, a "knightly" type of character that i think that even if he doesn't end up with inoue, he will honestly BE happy, as long as she is. not because he loves her so much that he is willing to ignore his own pain, but because he TRULY does believe that his feelings are secondary, so the pain will be minimal. it doesn't mean that he feels less for her either; it's just his head topples his heart. his quincy PoV will not allow him to suffer; not about love, at least. i think that it actually is him, or the ideal he lives up to. think tomoyo from CCS-- sure, fanfic writers (me included) love to dig up the possibility of her angsting on the inside about not being loved back, but truth is: she didn't seem unhappy at all. there doesn't necessarily have to be pain. uryuu might be that way, as well. it is the "right" thing to feel, in his "honorable" way of thinking. that bit in the SOULs book isn't terribly revealing; it feels much more about him as a character than anything shippy, or canon/not. and we already saw that in the manga, anyway.

all it means is that, while they parallel each other in their unrequited feelings, we can't compare them beyond that. it's kinda unfair to both of them. *shrugs*

other than that, thumbs-up to [livejournal.com profile] magicalcow for that bit about orihime wanting to stay in HM-- i completely agree! after all, she DID go to HM voluntarily... i'm sure she's ecstatic that her nakama are risking their lives to get her out, but she didn't ASK them to come and save her; i always felt there was a REASON she decided to go, other than the threats. and since she was feeling a bit useless lately, and she's been holding back while in HM, and the nature of her powers, she'd feel entitled to do something.

i'm glad kubo's puns seem deep in english and japanese, but his spanish leaves much to be desired ^^;;; or maybe i'm just anal about that =P

Date: 2007-11-28 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-and-warty.livejournal.com
SO LIKE, HI, I'M JUST SKIMMING THIS THREAD. BUT -- but, I need to express that I am in love with you.

Because you like, say everything I say about Ishida. Re: his being shot down by Orihime relating to him as on the level of Tatsuki or another girl, re: his like for her, re: Ichigo not being romantically inclined toward anyone but warming up to Orihime, AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, THE MAYURI ISSUE YES PLZ KT PLEASE TO BE ACKNOWLEDGING THAT THIS IS NOT A THING THAT WILL PLEASE ISHIDA.

Seriously, given Soul Society and now this, given that Ichigo reaches Orihime and has the dramatic meeting and instead Ishida is rescued by the one person he probably really hates ... Is, just, Ishida may care for Orihime, but I figure the Mayuri issue will/should be the biggest for him after this. I mean. mflds MAYURI, MAN. Unless KT ignores possible character development, again. D:

Date: 2007-11-28 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cccpirate.livejournal.com
:D! Thank you! <3

I'm really looking forward to the fallout from this arc, actually, considering that we've got two deserters (Renji, Rukia) -- I want to see what Soul Society does to them. Ishida, too, I'm really interested in -- Mayuri rescuing him? And oh man, oh man, Rukia and the whole Kaien thing. I just-- argh.

I think Kubo's been incredible with character development, though, looking back over the manga. We've seen Orihime develop from just a girl with a crush on Ichigo to one of the story's key figures, Rukia from a manipulative bitch-queen (and she *was* an absolute bitch) to being suicidal with angst and guilt, and I really don't need to mention Renji considering he was one of the first antagonists and has now become a main character. I don't think Kubo would have brought Mayuri in without having something planned out, even if it is just Uryuu angsting in a hole for a week or so afterwards. :D

Date: 2007-11-28 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-and-warty.livejournal.com


Mm, they're deserters, and then Soul Society itself did arrive, so I wonder. Much as the problem of the drifters was ignored in the greater scale of Aizen's bizniz, it may be that Rukia and Renji slide by -- their injuries enough of a slap on the wrist? But, yeah, I'm very curious to see how Rukia will be coping once she's conscious again. And I flipped my shit when it was Mayuri -- I had a feeling, because who can resist the crazy scientist battle? But still, for Ishida, that's terrible.

Oh, no, I agree. Rukia and Orihime have been extraordinarily well-developed, just, wow. But, KT has at least once skimped on Ishida. The "Anti-Shinigami" promise was introduced as a big conflict for him, something that would force him to separate ties with all of his "friends", something fairly major given how socially retarded he was before/and is. He agrees, but it never really comes up. Like, Ishida isn't really given the opportunity to be tested or face the consequence of prioritizing power and the ability to help those friends over being with them (kind of like chad's poem about wielding the sword, I think, and not being able to embrace while wielding it). Instead, he finds a handy dandy loophole and is on his way. Which, you know, of course I'm glad he's there, and he did that, and I suppose the point is that the promise wasn't the point, except that the chapter in which he comes to that resolve has a juxtaposition with Ichigo, and except that we don't see him consciously putting the assistance of Orihime & friends over the pride attached to his promise sworn on his honors as a Quincy.

Or Ishida is too clever for you with his loopholes, I dunno D: but something could've been done there that wasn't. SORRY FOR THE BABBLE, IDK IDK

Date: 2007-11-28 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
I'd say that I agree with you, but honestly? Yamamoto's a bastard. It wouldn't surprise me, at least, if he threw shit down (even if, in the long run, it was relatively inconsequential -- demoting Renji, for example (although again, I can see Byakuya being lolno) -- but then I'm a whore for the politics in Bleach :D).

I... think we'll see what happens with that afterwards. He made the promise to Ryuuken, after all, and Ryuuken's not there in Hueco Mundo. Like with after Soul Society and he was all, "lol, we're enemies Kurosaki", I think something similar might happen. He's found a loophole but whether or not Ryuuken accepts that is a different matter. It all depends on how Kubo plays it, I guess.

IT'S OKAY I LIKE BABBLE.

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Date: 2007-11-28 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
argh, wrong account, but still! :D

Date: 2007-11-28 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-and-warty.livejournal.com
S'okay, I got chuu. SORT OF.

Date: 2007-11-22 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chiave-trust.livejournal.com
Again, my apologies. But on the bright side, now I know more about particles!


*promptly goes to bash head onto nearest Japanese-English dictionary, since her head hurts already and because she wants to save the kittens*

Date: 2007-11-22 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicalcow.livejournal.com
Haha, it's okay! It's really an easy mistake to make, especially when the first three words are 'Ichigo no Rukia' -- which does mean 'Ichigo's Rukia' XD

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