1) I meant the first "was!" The rule of thumb is "as if---was" if scenario can possibly occur or be true; "as if---were" if scenario is logistically impossible (Ulquiorra not a mirror)and I probably think too much about these things....
2)TALENTS! A s/v agreement! *SHOOTS SELF FOR DUMB ERROR*
3)Grammarcheck on Word always gets me on that one; I don't know why I insist on my damn "a kindness" ^^
4)ah yes, excellent catch. I never would have seen it--I've read that part a zillion times
5) emphasis?
You're a good proofer. Thanks so much for doing this for me. You help my satisfy my intense neurosis about perfecting the grammatical universe!
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Date: 2007-04-27 12:56 pm (UTC)Woo, goodness!
1) I meant the first "was!" The rule of thumb is "as if---was" if scenario can possibly occur or be true; "as if---were" if scenario is logistically impossible (Ulquiorra not a mirror)and I probably think too much about these things....
2)TALENTS! A s/v agreement! *SHOOTS SELF FOR DUMB ERROR*
3)Grammarcheck on Word always gets me on that one; I don't know why I insist on my damn "a kindness" ^^
4)ah yes, excellent catch. I never would have seen it--I've read that part a zillion times
5) emphasis?
You're a good proofer. Thanks so much for doing this for me. You help my satisfy my intense neurosis about perfecting the grammatical universe!