interestingly enough, i was in a spiteful mood when i wrote this, and i really didn't have anyone to take it out on, so i chose my deep aversion to this pairing (its too shota for me) to take it out on. I'm glad it wasn't dark or angsty. I like nemu, i think she's got so much potential, and of course matsumoto is a riot. i'm glad you liked the beginning. i find dialogue difficult to write, so that was my little bit of practice ^_^
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Date: 2008-01-02 04:34 pm (UTC)