I think this story rocks, with or without the pron. (Tho 'with pron' is always nice!) I love how well the title informs what's going on in Orihime's head, and how you connected it all with what Tsukishima did/may have done to her in that attack. (Personally, I think a lot could be done with that whole idea.) Fantastic structure and word choice as always. So good to see fic from you again! :D
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Date: 2011-05-14 05:21 pm (UTC)I think this story rocks, with or without the pron. (Tho 'with pron' is always nice!) I love how well the title informs what's going on in Orihime's head, and how you connected it all with what Tsukishima did/may have done to her in that attack. (Personally, I think a lot could be done with that whole idea.) Fantastic structure and word choice as always. So good to see fic from you again! :D