I wrote a review for this and then thought LJ ate it. .__.; I hate internet cafes! Hate sitting here and seeing this and having a flail-fit because it deserves a synopsis-length review. ; So here’s a second attempt at a review. =P And LJ didn't eat the other one, turns out but here's this one anyway. I love how you write- how you wrote this. Present tense stuff always does something for me because it feels more real, more ‘now’ y’know? And you write the most gorgeous tragic Inoue ever, who wants to save the world if she could but can’t. And Ishida is just beautiful here. He wants to so badly to save her, fear or not and that she won’t leave … poor Ishida. It was a horrid fic in the loveliest of ways. I had to stop a few times and rewind and reread bits because some of the lines are so much like poetry that I had to go back and just savor them y’know? @.@;; <3
Gave me the shivers. And that Ishida feels so intensely. Yes! Because he does! @.@ Well, I think he does anyway. But of course there’s a front of not-feeling and it’s lovely to see how you write that too. ;.;
Did I mention the ending is just… buh? :mostly incoherent: @.@; Especially that ending. ;; God that ending! ;0;!
Your Inoue was lovely in this. And Your Ishida was especially gorgeous and I just wanted to squish him something terrible. ;;
Also, it’s awfully circular but this fic make me want to fanart it. ;; @.@; Which I know doesn’t make all that much sense but it does. Especially that closing scene. ;;; Damn you. =P :has an image idea in her head: Makes me want to write too.
Thanks so so much for this? @.@ <3<3<3 Was a wonderful thing to crawl online to. <3<3<3 :clings to: <3 (PS: You’re probably going to get two of these… I wrote the first, thought LJ had eaten it, went to post this, found had not and… well.. am weird but I was more coherent in this one. =P And I forgot to say thank you in the other! )
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Date: 2007-06-28 02:15 pm (UTC)I love how you write- how you wrote this. Present tense stuff always does something for me because it feels more real, more ‘now’ y’know? And you write the most gorgeous tragic Inoue ever, who wants to save the world if she could but can’t. And Ishida is just beautiful here. He wants to so badly to save her, fear or not and that she won’t leave … poor Ishida. It was a horrid fic in the loveliest of ways. I had to stop a few times and rewind and reread bits because some of the lines are so much like poetry that I had to go back and just savor them y’know? @.@;; <3
Gave me the shivers. And that Ishida feels so intensely. Yes! Because he does! @.@ Well, I think he does anyway. But of course there’s a front of not-feeling and it’s lovely to see how you write that too. ;.;
Did I mention the ending is just… buh? :mostly incoherent: @.@; Especially that ending. ;; God that ending! ;0;!
Your Inoue was lovely in this. And Your Ishida was especially gorgeous and I just wanted to squish him something terrible. ;;
Also, it’s awfully circular but this fic make me want to fanart it. ;; @.@; Which I know doesn’t make all that much sense but it does. Especially that closing scene. ;;; Damn you. =P :has an image idea in her head: Makes me want to write too.
Thanks so so much for this? @.@ <3<3<3 Was a wonderful thing to crawl online to. <3<3<3 :clings to: <3
(PS: You’re probably going to get two of these… I wrote the first, thought LJ had eaten it, went to post this, found had not and… well.. am weird but I was more coherent in this one. =P And I forgot to say thank you in the other! )