Regarding Renji...

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I just read the bloodscans and

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Ah, I think I have to tidy up the last two stories I wrote. I'm not pleased with either one. The Rukia piece needs me to give up that ending and still convey the "I feel separate from the world and my brother" feeling if it's going to make easy timeline sense... Sure, Rukia could be wandering around slaying Hollow for 40 yrs but it doesn't seem likely, as andrew said, that she wouldn't visit SS sometime. [EDIT] I spent an hour thinking about a rewrite and realized if I just cut the last line, it would work and I'd still have a dramatic ending. I added some other things, though, to make it plain that Rukia wasn't heading out on her first solo mission).

The Nemu piece has gotten good responses but it still seems heavy to me. Could probably cut a page and it would be smoother. But.... I'll prob leave it alone. I've got this Ukitake/Unohana fic I think I can actually finish. *thinks* IshiHime, UlquiIshi, AizenUlqui... which one, which one... I only have two more kidless hours for the morning....